Presentation

I have made a presentation to present next week. I asked two people to comment on my final piece to see what they thought about it, and how I could improve if I did it again.

From each slide of my presentation I have explained in bullet points what each of my processes was to get to my final piece.
This is so people know what  I had to go through to create my final piece.
For my presentation I haven't indicated all of my points in paragraphs or sentences. This is to make the presentation readable and easier to understand without reading off the board.